CONSTRUCTION - More Filming and Editing

CORRECTING THE SECOND DRAFT TO MAKE A FINAL DRAFT

We decided that we would do more a little bit more filming, just to correct some negative points we heard from the feedback of our second draft.

• Firstly, as the people didn't really like the side shots of her running, as they thought they were as good as the rest we decided to shoot a few more shots of her lying down on the mysterious person, to layer them over the top to make them more interesting, as this is what people thought would make it better.

• We also got an idea from our teacher that we should film a firework (cathering wheel), which we did. However, this wasn't as successful as we thought because the firework lit up the fence and this didn't look very good as we didn't want a massive fence in the background. But, we used about 2 seconds of the catherine wheel, but only the bit where you couldn't see the fence, which gave a good effect.

• We also added in another close up shot, as people wanted this type of shot more often. Also we filmed a few more shadows as people liked the shadows idea.

• After we filmed these last shots, we edited them over the bits that people thought weren't as good as the rest.